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by jdminhbg
4723 days ago
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Asking for a gender on a signup form with binary choice is a good way to end up at the center of a protest from the perpetually aggrieved. Repeating the sender's name in consecutive clauses is clunky and jarring. It would be much easier to just reconstruct the sentence slightly: "Matt Hofstadt wanted to make your day by sending you..." |
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