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by pwf
4743 days ago
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"The framing of this is right off the bat aggressive, casting him in the light of a criminal." Ignoring any moral aspects, isn't he technically a criminal? This certainly seems more neutral than your suggestion. Calling him a traitor would be out of line, but I do believe it was against the law to do what he did. It IS only 'purportedly' him; why do you expect CNN to report what it cannot confirm? The quotes around 'abusive' are suggestive, but it is also how you indicate that the word came from someone other than the author of the article. If you expect neutrality, expect the writer to segregate their words from their subject's. Your summary is far more emotionally charged and subjective. |
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* He violated the law (negative) * He exposed secret domestic surveillance by the government (positive)
They chose to highlight the negative, rather than the positive.
Purportedly went online on Monday? No. That wasn't the right word to use there.
Of course the abusive quotes can be interpreted that way, but there are other words that could be put in quotes because they too came from other sources. They chose to put 'abusive' in quotes but not 'national security initiatives', for example.
His summary is not emotionally charged at all - he shows how the same information can be worded in ways that highlight the positive or negative aspects. And it is clear what CNN did, to an extreme.