[thoughtcriminal]

I like the $3 pricing. I'm more inclined to try it now. But the price jump to $39 is a little dramatic. Maybe $19 instead?

Also, it looks and reads as a little too corporate. Add a dash of mailchimp-esque cuteness in there to lighten it up. Go nice casual, not formal.

[gilmanyu]

Thanks for your feedback! I would definitely work on my copy again. Cuteness sounds the way to try ;)