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by argonaut
4796 days ago
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The tone and diction of the article really struck me as odd and unusual. 1. The heavy-handed metaphorical comparison of YC to a summer camp: "During that time, campers, or founders, have regular meetings with each of Y.C.’s counselors, or partners," "The director of this camp," " basketball-court-size dining hall," 2. "The Y.C. term culminates with Demo Day, or D Day." N̶o̶ ̶o̶n̶e̶ ̶a̶c̶t̶u̶a̶l̶l̶y̶ ̶c̶a̶l̶l̶s̶ ̶i̶t̶ ̶D̶ ̶D̶a̶y̶.̶ 3. "or persist and grow 'organically' — an unsightly word in the valley of silicon." - The correct word would be "bootstrap." - and it's a totally acceptable word in the tech circles I've been in. EDIT: Ah, I stand corrected. I worked at a YC company in the past and I had never heard anyone (the YC founders I met) call Demo Day as D-Day. The snark is really uncalled for. |
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The magazine enjoys a much wider audience than most of the technology articles found here. Articles from the magazine are often framed as stories, following the path of individuals to show the purpose of the article. This also helps hold the attention of the reader through the article's longer length.
The embellishments you list out here are other tools the writer and editors use to appeal to the magazine's reader base.