[georgefox]

I hate to comment only on details and not on the actual content itself, but the aggressive use of bold text led me to read only the bold text. I didn't even bother to give the full text a chance. I saw typography that seemed geared toward the skimmer, so I skimmed. I'm not sure if that's the desired result, but that's the result it had on me.

[lotsofcows]

I managed the second paragraph. The constant switching of font really irritates me for some reason. It's like trying to read the bible.

[barrettabrooks]

Really glad you called this out. Thank you.

[barrettabrooks]

Great feedback. Thanks for that. I'll keep it in mind when I write articles in the future.