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by pseut
4802 days ago
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Off the top of my head; looks very nice. A few things jump out: * I hate the bird * copy editing: "it's got" -> "it has" everywhere; "in a beautiful way" -> "beautifully" (but really, "... It's got a pinterest layout to show the pages in a beautiful way" doesn't seem to add anything except the word 'pinterest' for SEO). "Sign up and see what perks merchants are offering to members. Simple as that." makes no sense; so... I sign up, and then you'll tell me what I get for signing up? edit: agree with other comments that you should not use a gmail account; use the domain. |
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