[khet]

Even if you are right, it would be a lot more helpful if you reasoned as to why you think that. That would help the original author improve the article and anyone else reading this to write better headlines and tutorials.

Your comment at the moment adds no value. The author spent hours writing something and you dismissed it with less than a reason.

[JeremyMorgan]

I am the author of the article, though I didn't submit the headline. I'm fairly used to this sort of criticism, especially when I create something targeted at beginners.

You're correct and not only does it not add value but the person you are criticizing gives no weight to your opinion, because you just look like a "hater". Seems like the trend these days.