[runjake]

> but I did want to get a sense of peoples opinions and advice

You have to realize HN is a very public place with an audience from extremely diverse places. You can guarantee someone from SpaceX has already laid eyes on your website and this thread.

[cole-maclean]

Okay, I've clearly jumped the gun here. I'm going to take it down, but I really appreciate everyone’s comments. I'm glad that I can use the advice I've already received here, and use it to make a final draft that might be more appropriate to post.

Thanks everyone.