[sfrechtling]

That's an interesting idea! The major point I would make is that it isn't clear why you want to work at SpaceX - the only point that alludes to it is that you want to work there because "Mastering space is one of the toughest challenges this generation will work on, and I want to be a part of that challenge from the beginning by working for one of the first private companies to tackle it"

Secondly - I'm not quite sure what you want to do at SpaceX; you haven't really defined your value to the company. If you want some further points email: seb [at] xtextx [dot] com. I used to work as a recruiter.

[cole-maclean]

Awesome. I'll try to better communicate why SpaceX is the company I want to work for. Specifying where I see myself working and adding value is a great idea, thanks sfrechtling.

[sfrechtling]

Good luck!