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by byamit
4846 days ago
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Initial reaction was...huh? But now I think I get it. I can order three services through your company: Lawn Mowing, Snow Removal, and Leaf removal. I just tell you I need it and you'll find someone to do it for me. But your website is full of words/phrases not relatable to a consumer in this space, the biggest culprit being 'contracts' or 'service contracts'. I trust that the work you're doing behind the scenes is innovative and impactful, but keep the pitch simple. Get Maid (http://getmaid.com) is an example where I feel the pitch is simpler. Edit: Sorry one more thing, I know you want to be global, but it's infuriating when I search for a provider and get back no results. If you're only available in a limited area today, be honest and tell me on the search page. And let me know you're planning to expand. |
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