[kenthorvath]

This:

On October 28th, the Library of Congress decided to not renew an exemption for carrier unlocking cell phones*

Should be changed as follows:

"decided to not renew" => "decided NOT to renew" =(or)=> "FAILED to renew"

at first glance, I misread it as "decided to renew".

Also, "Library of Congress" should be changed to "Librarian of Congress"

[bjustin]

"declined to renew" would be IMO better than throwing in an all caps word.

[kenthorvath]

Agreed, caps here to highlight the change.