[metastew]

Interesting read, though I just have one minor complaint about your style of writing... Foot notes after every 3-5 paragraphs is somewhat jarring and hampers the flow of reading your story. I suggest moving all of the foot notes to the bottom of the post and let the reader read them if they want to.

Just my $0.02.

[axusgrad]

The footnotes wouldn't have made any sense all the way at the end. My favorite footnotes on a webpage are when you can hover over the superscript, and have the note floating there. That way, they wouldn't interrupt the reading.

[mhartl]

The hover design, while nice, doesn't work well on tablets.

[nthitz]

Indeed, I got to the first set of footnotes and assumed I was done reading until I saw this comment!