[RyanZAG]

I'm in the industry so I get what you're saying here - but I'm pretty sure most VCs and your customers are going to be mighty confused. You should try and simplify a 'what we do' message that is easier to understand.

The first 30 seconds of introduction to your concept is the most important - make sure people can understand it!

[lancewiggs]

Without looking at the site, here are three potential what we do messages:

"We help businesses make compelling games using their own customer's data"

"We help businesses make personalised games for their customers"

"Personalised games for your customers"

[iosnoob]

I'm also in the industry and I second this.

Speak plain English and explain in a nustshell what you do for whom.

Investors and brands are busy, make it easy for them.

[Redoubtable]

Indeed! We've rarely had a confused customer thankfully.

[pekk]

This is also consistent with confused people not becoming customers.

[Redoubtable]

Heh well yes. Logical win :-)