As a casual observer (I'm not going to download the game as I have a lot of deadlines!), I'd suggest taking another look at your copy. I think you'll inspire more confidence to buy later on if you take it easy on the caps and paragraph spacing (good ol' Angry Birds is pretty professional https://itunes.apple.com/gb/app/angry-birds/id343200656?mt=8 as is Mighty Winds https://itunes.apple.com/gb/app/lostwinds/id477973472?mt=8 ).
Of course, I don't really buy iPhone games so if someone more experienced in the field tells me I'm completely off I'll instantly concede :)