[jessedhillon]

In your headings, my eyes were immediately drawn to the block letter text. It was only after I processed it and realized that your message couldn't be "we do mundane things" that it occurred to me to re-read it. Then I found the strikeout and scribblings.

You might consider beefing up the strikeout line and using a stencil font with a more fetching shade of red. Perhaps laid over the revoked text.

Or just drop the idea altogether -- I mean, what's the message there? "We were going to tell you how ordinary we are, but at the last minute we decided we're actually pretty extraordinary after all."

I would not call that your best foot.

[kelsokennedy]

Thanks for your honest feedback, I appreciate it.