| Hey, sorry about dissing your site. It's not that bad and could be tuned up quite easily. – The text shadows on the main page are a bit much. 1px offset is sufficient and the shadow color probably doesn't need to be so light. – Grey boxes around text are too tight and probably shouldn't be so rounded. – Headers on home-page are either too big or aren't given enough space. Whitespace! Don't be afraid to use it. – Darker shadows on headers have the same problem – too much offset – just looks tacky. – Title and description on homepage looks crammed into the top. Give it more space. Maybe smaller text. – Red headers are way too bright. Tone it down. – The bathroom-tile background image is kind of weird. – Body text is too wide throughout the docs. – More whitespace throughout the design would help (between all typographic elements), especially given your choice of a large, open typeface. |