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by giov4
7 days ago
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i checked out the article and while i find interesting the topic in general i think the blog post should be optimized in terms of writing, the mix of lowercase "i" and em dashes gives a bad impression you knowwhy, together with the writing style. an improvement could be more structured and direct text, more structured comparisons (tables) and less story like, think of a typical technical articles focusing on relevant details and presenting them neutrally and structurally |
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