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by gabriel666smith
17 days ago
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I was taught to use the term "action sentence" for an opening line that actually does something to a reader, and to aspire to that. I think it's a Gordon Lish-coined term, but it might not be. Hard to pick an absolute favourite, but one would be: "There was a time when I thought a great deal about the axolotls." From Cortazar's short story Axolotl. I don't know for certain why I find it so evocative, but it certainly draws me in, and makes me want to know more. Quoting without looking attempt: "I went to see them in the aquarium in the Jardin des Plantes and stayed for hours watching them, observing their immobility, their faint movements. Now, I am an axolotl." |
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