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I think it might be a training artefact of some sort - the current crops of LLMs have never been in a position where they can explore the world as an independent existence and so they might be struggling to model how to explain an interesting experience? The Go AIs had problems with ladders of all things (one of the most basic beginner shapes) back in the early superhuman phases after Alphago. There seems to be some similar and profound gap in the LLM understanding of how to communicate when storytelling.

The "But France was running two clocks at once" paragraph really set me off because I get the feeling something really interesting might be happening that the AI doesn't want to talk about and there is evidence that it is trying to say something. But the result is some amount of gibberish and some amount of vague allusion to something interesting in the prompt context while glossing over all the information that might matter while working hard to create an evocative feeling that isn't interesting. A tense atmosphere with no exploration of why there is tension.