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by glasner 4939 days ago
Hard to say much without seeing the keywords you're running this ad against. I'd say the biggest problem is that the searcher has no idea what you do from your ad. For all they know you could be selling wholesale shirts. So #1 get your main benefit/feature up front and center.

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Obviously you have to play with it but that should send you in the right direction. It's all trial and error though. Good luck!