It's not the word choice, it's the whole tone and structure of the sentence. It reads like a horror writer building up the tension before a big reveal but it just keeps drawing it out over a whole article and for something that isn't worth the build-up. It gets quite tiring to read IMO (LLM writing in general tends to have a grandiosity to it which really grates with something which is meant to be more informative, in my experience. They will explain a section of tax law like it's the second coming of Christ).