The text itself being exceedingly long for no obvious reason doesn’t help.
And if you think it was too long, what part would you have shortened? I never knew about the scene and found it interesting to read this personal take on it.
According to Pikka, the paragraph text is Taupe Grey (#92908a) on a Liquorice (#111110) background. That's... pretty far from black and white.
And if you think it was too long, what part would you have shortened? I never knew about the scene and found it interesting to read this personal take on it.