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by slap_shot
4964 days ago
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I would remove a lot of this copy that is referring to 'business model' - that's a term that you want to use with your business partners and investors, but not with your customers. I understand why you are bringing it up - to illustrate your transparency and commitment to privacy, but you should really just say that. Also, "We want customers, not users." sounds equally as bad. |
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The real question is if the target market is big enough to build a sustainable business.