[aphyr]

I put... I'd guess around 60 hours into editing this piece, and had review from a dozen-odd friends, and I am still finding and fixing errors. I imagine that asking an LLM for a copyediting pass probably would have been helpful, but goshdarnit, I want to show that we can still write somewhat-passable prose by hand.

[bluefirebrand]

> I want to show that we can still write somewhat-passable prose by hand

For what it's worth I think it's pretty reasonably good prose, not merely somewhat passable

[aphyr]

Thank you <3