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by ZeWaka 82 days ago
fresh spring grass erupting fast

the distant engine purr comes

ouch goes the lawnmower
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0______0 82 days ago
Beautiful. How did you come up with that? It's strangely captivating.
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ZeWaka 82 days ago
Just a normal haiku pattern and waiting for tests to finish, 5-7-5.

Could be 'wrong' since erupting is "technically" 3 syllables - but I think it sounds better said fast. Becomes a 7-7-5 that way. Same issue with 'lawnmower.'

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