[spopejoy]

> I have described what bothers me about the writing

No you haven't, you've made an unprovable claim about how the writing was accomplished without pointing out a single feature of the writing itself.

Too long? OK, but homebrew gamedev articles often are. Skimming was a good skill before AI and still is.

Bad writing? Again -- hobbyist posts don't exactly win awards. I suspected possibly some AI myself but not to the extent you're baselessly asserting: I really doubt there was a single prompt in any case. The article is structured like any other.

If it were content-free clickbait or something, the complaint would hold water. As it is this is a reasonably interesting article that has generated a large and fun discussion on HN, so even if you _could_ prove AI use, so what?