[catlifeonmars]

If I had to characterize it, most minimally-prompted LLM prose has two issues:

- the writing always feels self-important. I would feel a lot more receptive if I perceived that the writer came from a place of humility

- like you pointed out, overuse of writing techniques that work best if used sparingly. Sentence fragments can be effective for emphasizing a point, but if you use it in every. Single. paragraph, the effect is gone. It’s very amateurish.