[HNisCIS]

My brain kinda shuts off when I read this stuff because I know it's more of a "text shaped object" than actual text. I find LLM text to be too fluffy and information sparse much of the time so I subconsciously start skimming it more than actually reading it.

[SilenN]

Outside of the story at the start I intentionally tried to make it information dense. Would appreciate feedback!

[HNisCIS]

The story itself is fine it's more the trained response to LLM voice that causes problems