[beobab]

Very good read. Mostly very well laid out. I like the use of fonts.

Suggested improvements: The sign up form button doesn't look like a button. Maybe you could make it more "clickable". Personally, I'd put more whitespace at the bottom so that people can have the sign-up page and final paragraph more at eye-level. And one typo that I saw: I believe surprizes should be surprises.

Other than that, very interesting content. I'm quite curious, and keen to read your book.

[amiheines]

Thanks beobab, this is very encouraging. I will try and improve the button and of course I will fix the typo.

Now I should go back and continue work on that book.