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Show HN: Can you tell me what's wrong with this idea?
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by sqardius
4993 days ago
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Hi, I'm thinking of releasing a public beta real soon, but I have a small fear that things won't be as expected, so can you just point a finger on what's wrong? what could be done to get some traction? is it worth it? here is the link: http://www.sqardius.com any piece of advice, suggestion, remark or critic is highly appreciated. Thanks. |
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You need a copywriter though. The language on your homepage is vague and needlessly wordy. Here's an edited version of one of your paragraphs describing a use case:
"Lots of fun things happen at school. Share them with Sqardius, and leave memories for the future."