[AJRF]

Would you have any examples of convincing arguments to see if I can improve it?

Appreciate that extending the date range of data would improve the claims, as would adding more sources - but anything else?

[Herring]

I'd say stop trying to sell and just lay out the data correctly. There are lots of factors at work here.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Loneliness_epidemic#Causes_of_...