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by Delphiki
5012 days ago
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There are way too many colors (seven, not counting black and white), none of which really work well together. I personally don't like how the content is all one width the entire length of the page. I think it would look better to have some variation. There is an asterisk next to "Email," but there's no explanation why it's there. The star bullet points look like they were drawn in MS Paint. "take the workout with you on the road" seems misleading. Can you do this workout in your car while driving? Maybe pick a different location... "It's your turn! This special promotional rate ends soon. Start living the dream today!" - I feel like this should be higher up the page. What's the point of having it at the very bottom? |
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