[trapexit]

First impression: Are you red-green colorblind by any chance? I ask because your landing page looks much better with a protanopia simulation filter applied.

If you aren't colorblind, then, well, let's just say I suggest that you start with color schemes that have been well-tested in other successful direct marketing pieces.

If I'd hit this page from an ad link, I'd have bounced immediately before your sales copy even registered.