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by michaelpinto
5013 days ago
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I'm a professional designer but I'll tell you what I think doesn't matter. At the end of the day this is direct marketing and the best thing to do is to test your concept by placing an ad with AdWords. In fact I think the only thing you are really doing wrong is just having one page -- you should really test several pages that offer different copy and layouts. I would also suggest getting a professional copywriter who knows what they are doing... |
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Working on separate pages now.