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by southernplaces7
262 days ago
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My two cents: 1. Clean up the formatting of the page a bit, it seems a bit choppy along the edges, especially for the visuals (at least as viewed on a laptop). 2. Refine the content for the selling points about what it offers. It's grammatically awkward and wooden. Neither is a good idea in sales copy, especially in a service designed to help writers. Other than that, looks pretty good, and good luck. |
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