need a season word (kigo).
It's true; look it up.
needn't have seventeen morae
in total, either.
See, e.g., BashÅ's crow haiku, arguably one of the genre-defining poems [0]. Plus, English is on average terser than Japanese; I've read somewhere that, in English, 3-5-3 syllables pack roughly the same amount of content as the Japanese 5-7-5.
[0]: https://matsuobashohaiku.home.blog/2020/11/21/upon-a-withere...
As long as you have some fun
Refrigerator
needn't have seventeen morae
in total, either.
See, e.g., BashÅ's crow haiku, arguably one of the genre-defining poems [0]. Plus, English is on average terser than Japanese; I've read somewhere that, in English, 3-5-3 syllables pack roughly the same amount of content as the Japanese 5-7-5.
[0]: https://matsuobashohaiku.home.blog/2020/11/21/upon-a-withere...