[mhb]

FWIW: Your initial proposition, "Your days are slipping away." is a negative framing. Maybe this is a good way of appealing to people's fears, but I thought it was depressing and was not eager to read more.

An alternative could be something like "Make the most of your days".

[watwut]

I think that I have heard or read "Make the most of your days" in various ads and inspirational motivators too many times. It is something that makes me ignore whoever is saying it, because it was overused by everyone else.

[maghfoor]

Dude, that is so true. I think I agree with you and your reframing. Going to change it to that

[maghfoor]

And just like that, changed it in under 1min. Beauty of web dev.

[bdangubic]

you should reconsider, make the most if your days sounds like new years resolution that will end by the time you run of of ham

[iammjm]

I think your comment is more a statement about you and your past experiences, because I vibe with "make the most of your days" in a positive way

[Dilettante_]

Sounds like soulless generic ad copy that you see everywhere to me(respectfully, that's just how I read it).

[mhb]

That's fine. I'm not saying that particular example was great. Just that it might be better to have a positive rather than a negative "vibe".

[bdangubic]

carpe diem eh? never heard that before :)

[iglio]

You could consider running an A/B experiment, and track which treatment users engage with most.

[integralid]

I actually think about my life slipping away almost daily, but the reframing works too.