[crazygringo]

On the other hand, when we critique, it is for the benefit of everyone who reads the critique and learns from it.

That's why critique has value. To the original author/artist (if they see it), but also to everyone else who sees it. "Oh, I was going to intersperse text slides with a transcript, but I remember how offputting that was once on HN, so let's skip the slides."

[jsnell]

Text slides interspersed with the transcript work great normally.

But this is mostly slides with just four words of content, and a transcript that just be repeats the same words.