Hacker News new | ask | show | jobs
by WhyOhWhyQ 306 days ago
(I'm looking at the paragraph after FORWARD.) You should cut down on the sentences with commas. The flow stops and starts way too often.
1 comments
priceofmemory 304 days ago
Thank you for your feedback. I've rewritten the "Forward" to apply your suggestions and will keep them in mind when writing and improving chapters in the future.
link