[rkudeshi]

I'm a sucker for these types of "resume websites," so I clicked over. Some thoughts:

1) I literally have no idea what your app does. At a minimum, add one sentence about the app itself!

2) Is the aim of the site to really get featured by TechCrunch or do you actually want it to go viral amongst HN types? I ask because you give no reason for TechCrunch (or anyone else) to cover your app. What is special about it? Why would TechCrunch's audience be interested? Most of these types of websites have some type of "intro letter" explaining the benefits to the intended audience, which you are currently lacking.

3) Your video is pretty good (and helps me figure out what the app actually does!)...so why do you have it hidden in the bottom corner of the website and behind an additional click at that? Put it above the fold and make it easy for people to actually watch it! This could also solve point #1 mentioned earlier.

4) This is more of a personal thing, but I took issue with the line "we even made this better looking than our site!" Why should this random microsite be "better" than your app's real website? It made me curious, so I started looking for a link to the main website. I didn't find anything immediately and only then realized I had to click on the logo. So I clicked over and I think your "real" website is actually much better. You don't have flashy slide-in graphics like on the microsite, but you have a good concise description of the app and then a well-made link to the App Store. Might want to take some inspiration from that for this microsite.

Hope this helps and good luck!