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by carabiner
368 days ago
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I actually totally agree and was going to post this until I saw your comment. The writing is strikingly ChatGPT style. So many commas, weird phrase lists (especially with 3 items): > No shrinking. No waiting. No apologizing. > slowness, curiosity, accountability > Avoidance. Exhaustion. Disrepair. > It wasn’t intimacy. It wasn’t mutuality. It was access to simulation. |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rule_of_three_(writing)