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by unwind
5046 days ago
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If it's a UK company, I'm doubly amazed at all the editing misses on the main landing page. And I'm not a native speaker by far. To be constructive: -Inch symbol missing in first sentence
- Weird switch from "to work hard" to "and then relaxing"
- Repeat of "to use" in first smaller paragraph (by the Android icon)
- "its" instead of "it's" under Power and Portability
- Weird ellipsis in the Play Store, should be "blah ..."/"... blah",
not "... blah"/"... blah"
- Missing opening parenthesis in the Ethernet port caption
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