[wetzler]

Cool. Do you think the intro I added resolves the confusion?

"Hi, I’m Michelle. I recently left my job as a technical consulting manager and joined my best friends and my fiancé, Kyle, at Keen.io (I wrote about that here <link>). This is the story of how I negotiated my compensation."

[narsil]

This made things much clearer for me. I just read the blog post for the first time and wasn't confused.

[fratis]

Totally. :)

[ramchip]

Yes, thanks. Great article!

[taybin]

Yes, much better. Thanks.