[antisthenes]

Maybe the author should just write that?

There's a reason there's a saying "brevity is a sister of talent".

Whatever point you are trying to make surely could benefit if it actually reaches more than a few % of people who don't give up reading 10 pages of rambling when it should have been a paragraph in reality.

[lcnPylGDnU4H9OF]

> Whatever point you are trying to make

I rather believe she is not intending to "make a point" but instead express herself. One may prefer brief self-expression but certainly not all do. Put another way: the expression is the point.