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by stevage 429 days ago
You don't need the awkward "does". I'd go with:

It is a tool to suck up dust and dirt from rugs, wood or even tile.

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I liked that the original explained the value of the vacuum cleaner. It's not that it removes dirt and dust per se, it's that it makes spaces you walk on tidier.