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by pasbesoin 5071 days ago
This, finally, is the fourth paragraph:

Flock finds the photos you take together with family and friends and magically brings all the photos from each person's phone together into a single shared album.

At least it stands alone, making it somewhat more (quickly) identifiable.

And such formulation (as in this comment, by the way) is what is known as "burying the lede". [1]

I mention it because I'm getting rather tired of not just blog posts but also essays, news articles, and even marketing copy (which the OP could also be considered), that makes me read 200, 300, or 500 words before I learn what they are talking about.

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[1] http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/bury_the_lede