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by graeme
496 days ago
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It's full of inconsistencies, written by someone imagining the sea who has never seen the sea. For example, salt crusted wings of a gull. Gulls don't have salt crusted wings. It tends towards purple prose and doesn't maintain internal consistency in its own world. He sleeps on a pallet but swings his feet off the edge. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Purple_prose |
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