[codegeek]

Honestly, this is a typical generic one where may be you just edited the pargraph a bit about "Your job description emphasizes the importance of..". I would rather have you give me concrete examples. Instead of saying "I have consistently evaluated user feedback to..", give me an actual example.

Also, a bit too long. Make it shorter.

[lostlogin]

I’m in a completely different field, working in healthcare. This letter would rank well above the average one I get.

I receive cover letters with typos, the wrong word used, poor punctuation etc. If candidates could use a spell checking it would be a good start.

[DavidDodda]

thanks for the feedback!