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by greenie_beans 579 days ago
the sentence should be completely rewritten:

"I enjoyed John and Mary's visit yesterday."
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rawgabbit 579 days ago
The tyranny of active voice.
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greenie_beans 579 days ago
nah i just know how to write a good sentence, active verbs are only one tool. you're mistaken if you think the original sentence is better.
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