[gxs]

That article has to have some of the worst written language I’ve seen in a wikipedia article in a while.

Just bad, unclear, convoluted explanations.

Thankfully they provide a lot of examples - they should probably just skip to those and you’d be better off for it.

[card_zero]

I don't mind fixing it, but I can't see the problem. Which sentences annoy most?

[gxs]

Apologies man, I meant the Wikipedia article parent posed, not yours